Fellow word lovers, I thought you might like to see a sample of the new words, phrases, and abbreviations that were added to 2010 New Oxford American Dictionary. So it’s official, you can now use BFF and bromance in your novel, and your editor will just have to shrug it off. BFF : slang for best friend forever, a girl’s best friend bromance : a close but nonsexual relationship between two men cloud computing: the practice of using a network of remote servers hosted on the Internet to store, manage, and process data, rather than a local server or a personal computer credit crunch: a sudden sharp reduction in the availability of money or credit from banks and other lenders defriend, unfriend: remove someone from a list of friends or contacts on a social networking site green audit: an assessment of a business in terms of its impact on the environment hashtag: a hash or pound sign (#) used to identify a particular keyword or phrase in a posting on social networking websites such as...

When you hear the old adage, “ show, don’t tell ,” how would you break down the “showing” versus the “telling”? Many would break “showing” down into elements that create the sense that a reader is living out a scene moment by moment—namely dialogue, evocative setting, action, and suspense. “Telling,” one might conclude, is the point of exposition, those sections where the narrator communicates directly to the reader by summarizing events and character traits. If you accept these generalized definitions you will miss out on opportunities to “show” through exposition. Dennis Lehane does just that in his literary mystery, Mystic River . This passage is excerpted from a spontaneous block party that erupts after the return of 11-year-old Jimmy Marcus’s kidnapped friend, Dave Boyle. Jimmy doesn’t yet know what happened to Dave, but sees that he is surrounded by police and well wishers that include their fifth grade teacher, Miss Powell. When Miss Powell kisses Dave twice on the cheek Jimmy ...

This month we’ll go through some of the questions and comments you’ve submitted recently. But firstly a useful piece of information submitted by Cold As Heaven following a discussion on the doc and docx file extensions in Are You Missing Something? : Cold As Heaven said... The reason why they created the new docx [extension] (and pptx for Powerpoint) was to reduce file sizes (it's based on xml). Elle's response: To try that out, I re-saved an old 15MB document in .docx and it crunched it down to 150KB. That's 1% of its original size. Inspired by that I tried a bigger experiment and my 204MB megalith has crunched down to 6.5MB! Thanks CAH. In How to Stop Word Messing with Your Manuscript , Anonymous said... I type my book manuscript into Word 2010, save, then close. Then I open it to discover the font and spacings have changed in various places. So I fix it, save and close. Next day, same problem spacings and fonts have changed in several places. Elle's...

From our friend and writing mentor, Tracy Farr.... It's so frustrating to see people wasting time doing insignificant things when what they should be doing is focusing on ways to make their "product" so good that they can't be ignored. ("Product" can refer to art, music, pole vaulting, etc.) These people do a lot of silly things that have nothing to do with their main goal, but they talk themselves into believing they ARE important, thus preventing them from doing what they really know they should be doing. I, of course, have no such problem. My goal is to produce a Website that is like a three-ringed circus of humor (you never know what to expect, something's always climbing out of the clown car) with an ever-changing Side Show that keeps you coming back for more. But to accomplish that, I have to remain focused on my goals. I can't waste time on trivial things. I must always think about the means to the end. And that's why, when I sit...

If Halloween didn't scare you, maybe the thought of Christmas coming at the end of next month will. Where did all the time go? Had you meant to finish a short story for Christmas, or maybe even a book? Or, maybe you have a special manuscript you'd hoped to get done, but you've been stumped about how to do it. For some reason, certain parts of the publishing process elude you. If only you knew the answers. Here's your chance to find out. Not only that, we have a special offer. That's right, we give free answers to a great many questions from people like you right here in our Ask the Editor Free-For-All. Ask a writing question and our Editors will be happy to answer you. Here's how it works: Today, and every first Tuesday of the month, The Blood-Red Pencil hosts an Ask the Editor Free-For-All. We make a call out to e-groups, Facebook, social network friends, and blog followers to come on over and ask questions. Our editors are more than happy to share t...

One key element in creating a compelling character is the ability to CARE. What does your character care about? What is the goal? Let’s use as an example: a boy who loves baseball. This element of caring sets the character up in how he/she is going to live life, how he’s going to react to certain things. Giving your character something to care about commits her to her attitude or philosophy toward life. What next? We know what our character cares about, so what? We have to challenge him, threaten her and what they care about. Conflict . You throw him into a situation that challenges the part of him that cares and threatens the thing he feels is important. Example: the boy who loves baseball. Up the stakes: Perhaps he has a physical limitation and he can’t play baseball. So he collects baseball cards instead. Up the stakes: His precious collection is stolen. You create risk. This doesn’t always have to be through a villain—it can be weather, hard times, a moral dilemma, fricti...

There are two ways to look at Halloween. You can make it fun with great costumes at a party with monster music. Or you can make it scary. This tribute trailer to The Shining should put you in the mood. ------------------------ Patricia Stoltey is a mystery author, blogger, and critique group facilitator. Active in promoting authors in several genres, she also helps local unpublished writers learn the critical skills of manuscript revision and self-editing. For information about Patricia’s Sylvia and Willie mystery series, visit her website and her blog . You can also find her on Facebook (Patricia Stoltey) and Twitter (@PStoltey).

I admit I can't write very well without some sort of a plan. But I don't use an outline. I use a mind map . I first learned the technique from a Tony Buzan handout in a corporate training course decades ago. I've used the technique ever since, for taking notes, making a shopping list, planning a story. There is a ton of information online about mind maps and mind mapping programs for computers. Me? I prefer drawing them by hand because I'm a doodler, and in my finer moments, I even use assorted colors. I find it gives me the bones, but still allows me plenty of seat-of-the-pants opportunities. (Example below not mine. Isn't it beautiful?) How about you? Have you tried plotting this way? How are you preparing for NaNoWriMo ? Are you a plotter or a pantser? Leave us a comment! ~~~~ Dani Greer is plotting a number of different projects this week and has a mind map for each one.

Yep, it's NaNoWriMo time again, and this is the fifth year I'll participate. I think I've only finished and hit my goal once, but that doesn't keep me from signing up every year. It's an opportunity to renew my resolve to write daily, and to work on projects other than articles and blogging. I don't even necessarily try my hand at fiction, though that's the scariest and the most fun. For me, just getting into the writing groove with a (now) huge group of fellow writers, has a persuasive power that I don't get from smaller groups and certainly not on my own. (To give you an idea of how large this group has grown, just over 3% of the group has donated and has already raised over a quarter million dollars to fund their Young Writers Program.) I've written hundreds more pages during NaNoWriMo than I would have written otherwise, and every word has honed my writing skills. Some of them are even downright good, and someday I'll do something with the...

I used to advocate killing the internal editor, but I now see the importance of making friends with her. The IE often whispers things like, "Scene needs development," "Show more," or "That’s flat dialogue." Instead of halting your writing flow, make friends with your IE and take notes of what she says. I'm currently working on a novel that’s filled with IE notes I will handle in REVISIONS, not in the writing stage. I like having a book DONE, not perfecting a chapter for weeks. We need to learn how to listen to our IE, see how she just might be right, make note of what she says, and MOVE on in the story. Doing so will enable us to get a book DONE and have great notes for revision. How do you "make friends" with YOUR internal editor? ----- Writing in 140 is my attempt to say something somewhat relevant about writing in 140 words or less. ----------------------------- Shon Bacon is an author, editor, and educator. She has published both...

This is the conclusion of Kathryn Craft's interview with erotica author Kathy Kulig. Click here for Kathy's bio and Part One . Kathryn Craft: You write under your own name; others take on pen names. What went into this decision, for you? Kathy Kulig: Writers use pen names for different reasons. Some say if you write erotic romance it’s a good idea to use a pen name for privacy. For me, Kathy Kulig is my real name. I liked that it was short, easy to say and spell. I’d caution about using cutesy names or over obvious pen names like D.D. Stiletto or Raven Maniac. Or names close to well known authors like Stephen R. King, Norah Roberts, JK Rowling, etc. Kathryn: You know everyone's dying to ask: do you research all of the, um, situations in your novels to make sure they're workable? Kathy: My husband would love it if I said, “YES!” But you don’t need to commit a murder to write about it. You don’t need to be an FBI agent, a spy, an astronaut, an alien, etc. t...

Gutsy heroines and hunky heroes face the unexpected and overcome formidable odds, because with courage, true love can find a way… Such are the steamy romances Kathy Kulig loves to read and the stories she loves to write. Her erotica has been published in print, e-books and anthologies.    Kathy is an award-winning erotic romance author whose works include elements of BDSM and the paranormal. She has published several novels and novellas for Ellora's Cave. Her latest release, Summer Sins, is part of a series called Dark Odyssey. Besides her career in writing, she's a cytotechnologist and has worked as a research scientist, medical technologist, dive master and stringer for a newspaper. Kathy resides in eastern Pennsylvania with her husband. Kathryn Craft: Define the difference between romance and erotica. Kathy Kulig: There are actually three terms you should know: A Romance is about two people falling in love and struggling to over...

A few weeks ago, I attended the Emerald City Romance Writers Conference, put on by the Greater Seattle branch of the Romance Writers of America, in Bellevue, Wash. About 300 women were registered. That is, 300 women and ... me. Other than a few guest speakers and a few spouses floating about, I was the only man there. Let me assure you that while this sounds wonderful in theory, the reality was terrifying. At first, that is. Until I relaxed, and allowed my natural off-to-the-side objective observer's stance — strengthened through 23 years as a newspaper journalist — to step up. I completely let go of the fact that romance writing has no appeal to me, and let go of my vague notions of the genre as formulaic, simplistic and even condescending to its audience. What I came away with is this: These women know their stuff like nobody else does. There isn't a single aspect of writing and publishing craft they haven't considered from every conceivable angle — and reassembled ...

Becca stepped out of the bathroom. Wrapped in an oversized towel, she sauntered toward him. A seductive smile brightened her beautiful face. He exited his e-mail and hit the off button rather than wait for the computer to shut down. Pushing himself out of his chair, he hurried toward her. She dropped the towel and wrapped her arms around him. “What’s the matter, sexy man? You’re not ready for bed.” “I . . . thought you’d be in the shower longer. I was checking my e-mail.” “And I rushed through because I couldn’t wait to get out here to you. This is serious. I’m coming in a poor second to cyberspace.” He pulled her tight against him. Her warmth invited him to places he longed to go. Resting his head atop her damp hair, he struggled to lose himself in her presence. Her heart beat strong and steady against him. He loved her more than life itself. Without a second thought, he would die to save her or Haley or Mali. But a threat he couldn’t see coming from a source he couldn’t track—over th...

The first sex scene I wrote was for my second novel, and I almost didn’t write it. I plan my novels quite extensively, and, in this one, I’d planned for two characters to fall for each other and have a romantic tryst, but I hadn’t really planned for them to take it much further than a kiss. In the first draft I used the typical PG-13 Hollywood tactic of “fade to black, cut to next scene”. When I read it through, however, I faced a mental neon sign flashing “Cheat, cheat, cheat”. I couldn’t get passed this: I had to write that sex scene. So I did. I’d read books where euphemisms are used to describe what is going on between the couple and I was determined to avoid this. I used correct anatomical terminology and no cutaways, but I did stick to what my protagonist was feeling (emotionally and physically). And suddenly my characters revealed a lot of information that I would never have guessed otherwise. The nudity revealed a scar on my protagonist’s body that not only explained her mo...

One of the sexiest scenes I've ever read in a novel can be found in Free Fire , a mystery by C.J. Box. In it, Wyoming game warden Joe Pickett teams with Judy Demming, a National Park Service ranger, to investigate a killing in Yellowstone National Park. Pickett, as usual, is away from home, which has been causing problems between him and his wife. Demming is bored with her job and her husband. The spouses are both good people, and their partners love them, but they are largely offstage while Pickett and Demming bond during their travels through the park. Their shared career frustrations, and clear respect for each other's investigative acumen, lead to a subtly crackling chemistry that neither wants to acknowledge and yet cannot deny. In a painful, halting moment, they express unwilling vulnerability toward one another — and then mutually decide, with no small regret, that no physical lines will be crossed. So nothing happens. And yet, everything happens. I remember r...

 First of all, let me say I have nothing against a well-written love scene, and I do mean love scene, not sex scene. However, I draw the line at gratuitous sex and don't care for erotica. I just don't see what titillation has to do with story. Like every other element of writing a story, sex, violence, or colorful language should serve a purpose. For example, in Play It Again, Sam, I have a love scene that is a very important part of the story and the growth of the character. Sam is single after 25 years of marriage and the whole dating scene has changed. She is not sure about recreational sex. So when the love scene happens it is because she has worked though many issues. It's not just there because romance readers expect it. When One Small Victory was first published by Five Star, my editor there kept wanting me to let the central character, Jenny, do more than kiss the man she was attracted to. Problem was, Steve was the detective she was working for as a confidenti...

Two years ago, I talked to author Rachelle Chase about writing sex scenes as part of a series on my blog All the Blog's a Page . For the talk, I asked two questions: Is sex an important component to develop in your writing , and how are you able to weave it into a work and also have a strong plot development? Her detailed response is still relevant because as Chase points out, it's not just about having sex in your story; it's about layering the sexual undertones into a fully developed story. As Chase is quick to point out below, sex is not the story; it is an integral, organic component to the story. Below is Chase's take and a "lesson" on sexual development within a story... I write erotic romance, so sex is VERY important. The way I weave it into the story and have strong plot development is by making sex a part of the story . When my characters are doing nonsexual things or are talking about nonsexual things, there are sexual undertones. When my ...

Naturally, ghostwriters need to be good writers, but there is another skill that is equally important. We need to be good interviewers. Interviews are not only for gathering information; they also allow me to capture the unique voice of my client. I wrote an article titled “My 12 Interview Rules” sharing some things I’ve learned about this facet of my job. But it’s intended for ghostwriters, which most of the readers of The Blood Red Pencil are not. However, here’s a tip that I think all writers, ghostly or not, can use: interview yourself. Talk your thoughts instead of writing them. Tell a story, or muse and ponder, out loud – and record yourself doing so. Then play it back. What metaphors and idioms do you use? Do you have an accent, or use words and phrases that betray your origins? What are you not saying, and why aren’t you saying it? Pay attention to the cadence of your speech, the rhythm of your words. Do you write true to your own voice? Transcribe the recording verbatim...

At the top of my blog, A Mind Adrift in the West , there is a quote from Ernest Hemingway: "Prose is architecture, not interior decoration." Papa was a smart man, and this quote is one of my guiding lights when I sit down to write. If I build well, my story will stand up. The time to worry about the color of the walls (just to stretch this metaphor to the breaking point) comes later. I would posit that one of the essential elements of rock-solid writing is balance -- properly weighted words, meanings, cadences. A well-designed sentence has structural integrity that promotes simple elegance and ease of reading. One of the ways this balance is achieved lies in parallel construction. Consider this sentence: She wore taffeta, diamonds and had a gold ribbon in her hair. That sentence is out of balance, and it thumps along the page like a warped wheel. The solution? Make the construction parallel: She wore taffeta and diamonds and had a gold ribbon in her hair. The o...

L. J. Sellers’ excellent post entitled “ Publisher Evaluations ” provided invaluable information on the various aspects of our manuscripts that publishers review when deciding whether to take on our book (story). One of those areas in particular—point of view—often challenges writers, including some of us with considerable experience. Point of view has been addressed before, but let’s play with it another time to see how different POVs change the same scene. The paragraphs below depict three points of view in this abbreviated lesson from my writing manual. The first one—omniscient—is the most cumbersome and least effective. See if you can figure out why? #1 Spot glanced over his shoulder. The dogcatcher’s vehicle turned the corner and began following him. Sprinting across the street, he headed down the block toward the park. “There he is!” the driver shouted to his partner. “Let me out!” his partner yelled. The man hit the sidewalk at a full run. “I’ll get that mutt if it’s the...

First-hand research is always best. Sometimes it’s not an option and a writer has to depend on books, Internet searches and second-hand accounts. You’ve got a character zipping off to Mexico City, but you’ve never been there and can’t go do research. So you turn to secondary sources. Luckily, writers can find out lots of information from other places and they can go to chat rooms and ask questions of people who live in Mexico City or other places they need to know about. Some places never seem to change, making it easy to get by without a lot of searching for info. Like Central Texas. Hot. Little rain. The trees are always green. We only have two seasons: flip flops and shorts … or flip flops and a long-sleeve t-shirt. January or July – it’s all the same. Wrong. That’s a myth perpetuated by Texans like me. Today is beautiful. Granted, most days in Central Texas are, but we do have rain. We do occasionally have to wear coats. Some people even wear close-toed shoes – I’m not often ...