Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Time Out For a Little Fun

This is a good lesson in how not to irritate your readers, or audience. Thanks always to my friend Slim Randles for sharing his humor. For more wit and wisdom check out his national-award-winning book “A Cowboy’s Guide to Growing Up Right.” Read a sample at www.slimrandles.com

The closed-season school board meeting was called to order half an hour late by its chairman, J. Buckdancer Alcott, because the board members saw Windy Wilson sitting in the audience.

Windy had no children, and he sure as sugar wasn’t a teacher, but he could talk. And he was patiently biding his time. Despite the board’s foot dragging through the agenda, Windy didn’t give up and go home.

Finally, Alcott said it was time for public feedback and asked if anyone wanted to speak. Windy raised his hand. Alcott looked desperately around, but Windy’s hand was the only one raised. He nodded in Windy’s direction.

“My name is Alphonse Wilson,” he said, standing, “and I live here.”

“We know who you are, Windy,” said Alcott.

“Thanks, Buck. I feel it’s my duty to bring to the board’s attention a strategic dearth of learning with these young people today. A paucity of eddyflication. In short, their vocabulary is seriously obfusticated. We have to ask ourselves, what are these young people going to do in polite society when a hostess passes around the horse doovers? Are they going to palaver proper, or just sit there on their sacrolibriums and nod? Are they going to be admitted to the barn association, write them writs of habeas porpoise, or just sue each other out of court? Are we really doing them a favor by not enrichelating their talking prior to a proper propulsion into adultery? I say no!”

Two ladies in the audience quickly excused themselves and dashed into the hallway.

“Instead of being instructed in proper English, our students today spend all their time watching private defective shows on television. So I think teachers should work on getting ’em more eloquenter than they are now.”

“Mr. Wilson,” asked one of the board members, “what is it about the way our students speak that you find objectionable?”

“They say like all the time.  Instead of making a simple declarational sentencing, they say, ‘Oh, I was like this and he was like that, and she like ate dinner.’"

Windy doesn’t even charge for these lessons. They’re always, like, free.


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  Maryann Miller is a novelist, editor and sometimes actress. Her latest release is Open Season as an e-book for all devices. To check out her editing rates visit her website. When not working, Maryann likes to take her dog for a walk and work outside on her little ranch in East Texas. 

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12 comments :

  1. Funny like, and I'm still like, smiling!

    Thanks

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  2. I'm like so happy you are enjoying the nonsense.

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  3. I always enjoy it when Slim stops by.

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  4. I'm still smiling, too. However, I think there just might be a bit of truth behind Slim's humor. Let's just say that edgicashun ain't what it used t' be. :-)

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  5. LOL! Love ol' Windy--he's one smart feller!

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  6. Like, ya know, I kinda like this clairif-vacation.Which reminds me, kids today get too much clarif-vacation days. 'Course, I'm speaking from a parent's POV, not the kids, mind you.

    It's nice to read a post that makes you smile and laugh. Thanks.

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  7. This was a great follow-up to our conversation about language last month! Reminds me of a little girl I once knew who always reached beyond her usable vocabulary. Wish I'd written all that down—this was good!

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  8. Thanks everyone for stopping by and letting us know how much you enjoyed the humor. For an award-winning author, Slim is pretty shy, but one of these days I will get him to stop by.

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