April Showers, May Flowers

What do April showers and May flowers have to do with writing? Much more than we might think. How so? Cause and effect.

by Seemann at MorgueFiles

A primary mover of story that keeps the reader riveted to its pages is conflict—what causes a rift or problem between characters or character and circumstances and what short- and long-term effects ensue. Conflict (which often springs naturally from a “what if” writing mentality) creates loose ends, both great and small, that almost always need to be tied up. Failing to address even little dangling “ends” may make a disappointed reader hesitate to purchase our next book, so this is a biggie when it comes to establishing ourselves as go-to writers when a reader wants a sure-fire great book.

One of the big differences between mediocre work and excellent work is attention to details. When applied to writing, this difference includes the cause-effect-loose ends-resolution scenario. While there may be times when resolution isn’t appropriate (as in real life, it isn’t always attained), the reader may want that spelled out in some way so that it’s obvious realism rather than omission by a forgetful author.

by pippalou at MorgueFiles

My beta readers are excellent at spotting my loose ends and calling me to account. Also, I read and reread the manuscript, which allows me to catch some of them, especially if a bit of time elapses between readings. Interestingly, I sometimes wake up in the middle of the night and realize I’ve overlooked something in my story. (Apparently, my subconscious is working even when I am not; but because this is not a fail-safe method, I rely heavily on my beta readers.)

How do you make sure you tie up the loose ends in your stories? Please share any innovative ideas you have for avoiding this error in writing.

Now about those showers and flowers here in Colorado. Trees are sprouting baby leaves, and we’re hoping for the showers that bring those beautiful May flowers. (Otherwise, we go to Plan B—get out the hose and help things along.)

Linda Lane and her editing team mentor and encourage writers at all phases of the writing process. To learn more about what they do, please visit them at DenverEditor.com.