tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post8808219752824782806..comments2024-03-18T01:49:03.153-06:00Comments on Blood-Red Pencil: How Do You Show Feelings?Danihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14471919576687777886noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-52001583945210086942012-07-29T08:12:25.538-06:002012-07-29T08:12:25.538-06:00Thanks, this story is very interesting and absorbi...Thanks, this story is very interesting and absorbing! I'm looking forward to reading your new stories! You wield a formidable pen, my friend! This information is really useful! It's just what I was searching forGilhttp://e-advokat.com.ua/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-72598071672489852772011-12-17T16:51:08.275-07:002011-12-17T16:51:08.275-07:00Thank you for this post. My biggest weakness is sh...Thank you for this post. My biggest weakness is showing vs. telling and it's something I work on constantly.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-77348067165878037102011-12-15T15:12:48.189-07:002011-12-15T15:12:48.189-07:00Definitely liked and "felt" the second v...Definitely liked and "felt" the second version more than the first. Excellent examples.Helen Gingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09794759602654727110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-81843023078180968402011-12-15T08:34:29.023-07:002011-12-15T08:34:29.023-07:00Painting those word pictures is ever so important....Painting those word pictures is ever so important. The viewer can almost walk into a great painting of a scene. Readers should do the same with our stories. <br /><br />Excellent piece, Heidi. This wonderful bit of writing advice will always be timely.Linda Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06686488133905538811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-2137479743925192352011-12-15T07:59:01.904-07:002011-12-15T07:59:01.904-07:00Very interesting post! Thanks a lot.Very interesting post! Thanks a lot.essay writer ukhttp://custom-writing.co.uk/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-29488424006304650152011-12-15T07:45:57.167-07:002011-12-15T07:45:57.167-07:00I'm glad this post was resurrected today. I wi...I'm glad this post was resurrected today. I will send a link to a client I am working with who is just beginning to learn some of these elements. Thanks, Heidi.Maryannwriteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09479027709233807149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-17521664147907995012011-12-15T07:03:44.490-07:002011-12-15T07:03:44.490-07:00Must've worked, Heidi ... I'm feeling warm...Must've worked, Heidi ... I'm feeling warm and fuzzy ... well, I feel fuzzy most of the time, but the warm thing, that's new.Christopher Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667548312923348614noreply@blogger.com