tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post3700145833814286956..comments2024-03-28T01:44:27.279-06:00Comments on Blood-Red Pencil: Self-Editing One Step at a Time: Fine-Tuning Sentence StructureDanihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14471919576687777886noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-31027526418859675792017-12-13T11:29:27.049-07:002017-12-13T11:29:27.049-07:00Example 1 is an instance of a character talking to...Example 1 is an instance of a character talking to the reader, filling them in on information. I don't mind this. It isn't intrusive to me as long as it isn't a long-winded info dump.Diana Hurwitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216220574149672733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-25729906846341480792009-12-04T17:05:07.130-07:002009-12-04T17:05:07.130-07:00Great post! I've tweeted it...
Elizabeth
Mys...Great post! I've tweeted it...<br /><br />Elizabeth<br /><a href="http://mysterywritingismurder.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow"> Mystery Writing is Murder</a>Elizabeth Spann Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15625595247828274405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-38095872618159669082009-12-04T13:45:02.357-07:002009-12-04T13:45:02.357-07:00All really good points. I find these niggles very ...All really good points. I find these niggles very hard to spot, as I know what I meant to say!Roz Morris aka @Roz_Morris . Blog: Nail Your Novelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10088813423467048081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-84504318469041217212009-12-04T12:48:36.473-07:002009-12-04T12:48:36.473-07:00I liked this tutorial, Patricia. Thank you!
Helen...I liked this tutorial, Patricia. Thank you!<br /><br />Helen<br /><a href="http://straightfromhel.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Straight From Hel</a>Helen Gingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09794759602654727110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-86448093759809866422009-12-04T12:00:34.303-07:002009-12-04T12:00:34.303-07:00This post gave me a boost of confidence. I think ...This post gave me a boost of confidence. I think I've pretty well mastered these areas.Lillian Robinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13488638666900705015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-35589714750539222212009-12-04T10:46:21.226-07:002009-12-04T10:46:21.226-07:00Oops, I neglected to add the "best" to t...Oops, I neglected to add the "best" to the series in No. 6: Use active verbs instead of passive so the sentence reads, "I weeded the garden, pruned the roses, and mulched the tomatoes." Must have had a brain freeze...Patricia Stolteyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17192369425956406122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-78256578604490438932009-12-04T04:58:36.965-07:002009-12-04T04:58:36.965-07:00Thanks - great tips!Thanks - great tips!L. Diane Wolfehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06425864276166334896noreply@blogger.com