tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post1588930893321350554..comments2024-03-28T10:41:26.999-06:00Comments on Blood-Red Pencil: Writing in 140: Using Story to Kill Clichés and Freshen Up MetaphorsDanihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14471919576687777886noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-81643686382567391442013-05-13T20:08:37.786-06:002013-05-13T20:08:37.786-06:00If nothing else, your characters need to be authen...If nothing else, your characters need to be authentic, have their own voice. Not a carbon copy of something else. Love the blog!!!mochasistahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01187815029827187674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-41515166574605800272013-05-13T18:24:24.945-06:002013-05-13T18:24:24.945-06:00Thanks for commenting, everyone!
I definitely ag...Thanks for commenting, everyone! <br /><br />I definitely agree that characters need to be themselves... and if a character HAS to speak with sprinkled cliches, OK, but I would still be looking in my dialogue, too, to see if cliches are running the show. If a particular character uses too many of them, readers might find the character cliche, stereotype the character and skim whenever that character comes onto the page, assuming to know what the character will say or think or do. <br /><br />LOL... Dani... "back in the day" is like the #1 used cliche in every paper I've read this semester!Shonell Baconhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04827197354857197637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-9589742724699086522013-05-13T12:13:59.365-06:002013-05-13T12:13:59.365-06:00Today Buzz Feed is running the derivation of 35 cl...Today Buzz Feed is running the derivation of 35 clichés: http://www.buzzfeed.com/lukelewis/the-surprising-origins-of-35-english-phrasesKathryn Crafthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08371458857187160425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-47049796587243760322013-05-13T11:23:52.067-06:002013-05-13T11:23:52.067-06:00Speaking of cliches, one of my least favorite used...Speaking of cliches, one of my least favorite used by all ages: back in the day. What a cryptic expression!Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14471919576687777886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-30451915121026677722013-05-13T11:21:43.847-06:002013-05-13T11:21:43.847-06:00Actually it's astounding how often teens use o...Actually it's astounding how often teens use old-fashioned expressions they have no clue about. I just heard a 13-year-old say, "turn the tables", an expression so outdated, few people my age even know what it truly means.Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14471919576687777886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-77529022530010931612013-05-13T11:05:50.448-06:002013-05-13T11:05:50.448-06:00In every single discussion of cliche, everywhere, ...In every single discussion of cliche, everywhere, someone will defend the right of their characters to speak in cliches—to the point that the defense itself has become a cliche. <br /><br />Okay writers, feel free.<br /><br />But I agree with Shon that cliches are best considered placeholders—a quick stock phrase that you can quickly insert while drafting. Later, while revising, I think it behooves us to reconsider the use of every single one.<br /><br />Even in dialogue. Why? Cliches flip a switch in the reader's head: "You've seen this before. It's not important." Skimming ensues.<br /><br />Now considering that the quotation marks that set off dialogue are a spotlighting technique in and of themselves—you are signaling the reader to pay attention, with the promise that something important is about to happen—why on earth would you want to draw such attention to a word combination that you didn't even devise?<br /><br />Not that I get hot about this topic or anything. ;)Kathryn Crafthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08371458857187160425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-37940686352892553192013-05-13T09:58:25.939-06:002013-05-13T09:58:25.939-06:00You hit the nail on the head.You hit the nail on the head.Christopher Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03667548312923348614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-63328112770353483192013-05-13T08:57:17.849-06:002013-05-13T08:57:17.849-06:00I like the idea of playing with cliches to change ...I like the idea of playing with cliches to change them around. I've seen it done quite effectively in a number of books.Diana Hurwitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216220574149672733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-67893636139488216452013-05-13T08:37:13.497-06:002013-05-13T08:37:13.497-06:00Shon, I agree with Larry that dialogue needs to be...Shon, I agree with Larry that dialogue needs to be realistic, and people use clichés -- some people, that is. Teens likely wouldn't use the common ones. They develop their own clichés that often vary from generation to generation. Many people for whom English is a second language are totally confused by clichés because words used in that context are out of synch (a cliché?) with their literal meanings. <br /><br />On the other hand, twisting a cliché to fit your story or characters or creating fresh, vivid word picture adds originality to your work and becomes a part of your style. Isn't writing fun? :-)Linda Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06686488133905538811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-8549605994523687272013-05-13T05:18:04.522-06:002013-05-13T05:18:04.522-06:00Shon, I like the idea of your self-imposed (at lea...Shon, I like the idea of your self-imposed (at least I think it's self-imposed) 140 constraint. Thanks for the reminder to reread for cliches and tired metaphors, though I do ditto Larry's posts. And I found your use of the adjective "stale" ironic given the topic. (My "tired" isn't much better. :-)<br /><br />Coming up with creative and succinct metaphors is one of the more difficult parts of writing for me. The ones that don't work fluctuate between being a child gifting me a wilted flower and the blowhard at my dinner party table.<br /><br />alisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17481879917467051418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-49256569899462294732013-05-13T00:48:06.815-06:002013-05-13T00:48:06.815-06:00Addendum: In some cases your characters themselves...Addendum: In some cases your characters themselves can freshen the metaphor. In my WIP, a lawyer refers to the overweight foreman of the jury by saying, "Hang in there. It ain't over until the fat jurist sings."Larry Constantine (Lior Samson)http://www.amazon.com/author/liorsamson/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-53420665926407150922013-05-13T00:44:34.512-06:002013-05-13T00:44:34.512-06:00Right on, Shon. (Cliche) But I think there can be ...Right on, Shon. (Cliche) But I think there can be a place for cliches of speech, which is in dialogue. Real people talk that way. In fact, I've overheard conversations where most of the lines were canned quotes. Viz: "I'm up to my eyeballs in alligators." "Me, too. But ya gotta do what ya gotta do." "And it ain't over until the fat lady sings." "You can say that again." "It ain't over until--" "Hearty har har."<br /><br />Your dialogue has to fit the characters and context.Larry Constantine (Lior Samson)http://www.amazon.com/author/liorsamson/noreply@blogger.com