tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post7216547786261139782..comments2024-03-28T10:41:26.999-06:00Comments on Blood-Red Pencil: Line Editing -- Part TwoDanihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14471919576687777886noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-70088700362589368302009-04-28T15:45:00.000-06:002009-04-28T15:45:00.000-06:00Interesting, yes, but I have also read posts that ...Interesting, yes, but I have also read posts that advise not to be too flowery. 'Don't use ten words where one will do' or it will interrupt the flow of the story. So much advice can be confusing...<br />Blessings, StarStella Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06699491230987143490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-54728115078120263182009-04-27T21:39:00.000-06:002009-04-27T21:39:00.000-06:00You always make me go back and look at what I've w...You always make me go back and look at what I've written that day. Great post.L.J. Sellershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10213491074676394406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-78428632728877580692009-04-27T21:03:00.000-06:002009-04-27T21:03:00.000-06:00Thanks for the examples!Thanks for the examples!Meghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08718382178913859357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-37483155723018253732009-04-27T17:35:00.000-06:002009-04-27T17:35:00.000-06:00Love the examples you give. Great post Maryann.Love the examples you give. Great post Maryann.Helen Gingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09794759602654727110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-57807164276411494892009-04-27T15:43:00.000-06:002009-04-27T15:43:00.000-06:00I loved this!! Makes me want to run to my WIP and ...I loved this!! Makes me want to run to my WIP and check them.Terri Tiffanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07771622379178654235noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5704943052235281766.post-63257636530835619722009-04-27T14:03:00.000-06:002009-04-27T14:03:00.000-06:00Great info and reminders. I hope you do more of th...Great info and reminders. I hope you do more of these. TTeresa Burrell, Author, Attorney, Advocatehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00008721460499855699noreply@blogger.com